it’s great, except for the 80% we want you to cut

I got that acceptance letter this week – we love it but please resubmit it as 20% of its current length.

I’m pretty sure that to cut 80% of my story would pretty much leave us with very imperative sentences and not much else (He go. She eat. etc.) Maybe it’s worth trying as an intellectual exercise? But I can only imagine how frustrated I would get.

Back to the submission game.